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09 March 2009 @ 06:32 pm
Work In Progress One liner's  

This has been popping up in several journals and I thought "what the heck, why not."  And it has made me realize I have quite a few WIP that are just hanging at the moment.  I need to make a decision about them.  Now, whether I do that or not...

Post a single sentence extract from each WIP you have (or as many as you want to pick). No context, no explanations.

 “Hiding my emotions is the easiest way to survive particularly when I know I just cost a whole platoon of bots their lives including that of The Primes Third in Command.”  

 Everyone in the Ark crew knew something had happened involving Jazz and Perceptor. 

 I waited, now get it off and let me shoot it.”

 “I’m the one with doubts about the Decepticon cause, yet apparently I’m the only one of the three of us who’s even a Decepticon; well that’s just prime.”

 Sideswipe was pretty sure he’d never seen a mech so cratered that it bordered on the edges of energon poisoning; and certainly never Prowl.

If we don’t send the message, and Primus forbid we do lose him, they will tear us apart right before they go after the Cons who did this, along with anyone else who has the misfortune to get in their way.

 The initial plan had been for Smokescreen to take Prowls paintjob and Bluestreak to take smokescreen’s with Prowl getting Blue’s; until Prowl realized that Smokescreen with a law enforcement paint job might lead to things he did not want to contemplate, but would no doubt eventually hear about from the local authorities.

 
 
 
okamichanokamichan on March 10th, 2009 01:18 am (UTC)
Sideswipe was pretty sure he’d never seen a mech so cratered that it bordered on the edges of energon poisoning; and certainly never Prowl.

Can I encourage this bunny? *pokepokepokepoke!*

also the first one! please? :3

Also the last one!

There, I've put in my two cents. ;P *runs away giggling*
cmdrtekkcmdrtekk on March 10th, 2009 04:41 pm (UTC)
The first two you mentioned actually belong to different bonus scenes for Holding out for a hero and are essentially done.

The last one is something I've been messing with for a few months. I still like the storyline so we'll have to see.
Potential Incarnatesilveriss on March 10th, 2009 01:46 am (UTC)
I so want to see something from the last one. That sounds hilarious!
cmdrtekkcmdrtekk on March 10th, 2009 04:45 pm (UTC)
The last one is a storyline I have been messing with for the past few months. It was written for some humor and then the muse became difficult.
This meme has perked my interst in it again, but we'll have to sdee how the writign goes.
Potential Incarnatesilveriss on March 10th, 2009 09:50 pm (UTC)
^^ I do hope you get your muse back and all goes well. They all sound like wonderful ideas.
kirin_saga: Cheerskirin_saga on March 10th, 2009 03:14 am (UTC)
Interesting! I especially love these two:

Sideswipe was pretty sure he’d never seen a mech so cratered that it bordered on the edges of energon poisoning; and certainly never Prowl.



The initial plan had been for Smokescreen to take Prowls paintjob and Bluestreak to take smokescreen’s with Prowl getting Blue’s; until Prowl realized that Smokescreen with a law enforcement paint job might lead to things he did not want to contemplate, but would no doubt eventually hear about from the local authorities.

cmdrtekkcmdrtekk on March 10th, 2009 04:49 pm (UTC)
The first one you mentioned is a done deal for the most part. It's part of the Bonus Scenes collection for Holding out for a hero. The context that goes with it - it will be intersting to see what people think I suppose.

THe second one youmentioned is a storyline I began messing with a few months ago, a light hearted humor fic. Then the humor muse fled. My interst has perked becasue of this wip meme, but I don't know about the muse.

Thanks.
bookworm_faith: evil bookwormbookworm_faith on March 10th, 2009 12:07 pm (UTC)
I have NO clue where the last one is from, but I know I want to read it! XD
Second is from "Last & Alone" I think?
...the fourth one...I remember that ficlet! The one where Skywarp AND Starscream are undercover autobots right?
cmdrtekkcmdrtekk on March 10th, 2009 04:56 pm (UTC)
The last one is as of now unfinished and unposted in any form but this one sentence. I started the thing as a light hearted fun little story, then the humor muse fled.

Yes the second is from what I hope will be the next chapter of Last & Alone if all the bots would just cooperate and let me type it up.

And yes the fourth one is from a possible second chapter for Snooping Quandary which was the story where Starscream and Skywarp are undercover Autobots. Again it's a WIP that I am toying with since Snooping Quandary was written with the plan to leave it as a one shot.

Thanks.